Thank You To Mrs Ealam!
Yesterday me and Georgia went to an launch in Monteiths Brewing, Greymouth. We did blogger while other teachers from different schools asked us what we do in school. They also asked us some other things about blogger and how daily we do it. After, on the way home, Mrs Ealam (she took us to the launch) asked us if it was KFC of MCDONALDS! We had eaten chips and drunk apple juice at the launch so we didn't want any junky food. So we asked Mrs Ealam if we could go to Subway instead! She didn't mind. I ordered a chicken teryaki.
THANK YOU MRS EALAM!
-FROM HAYLEY & GEORGIA
Hey Hayley
ReplyDeleteWow that sounded like so much fun and you have described what you did very well so it felt like I was there with you. Right at the start when you said "Yesterday me and Georgia" I would just change that around so it reads "Georgia and I." Just make sure you re - read then check with a buddy e.g KFC of McDONALDS when it should be or MCDONALDS and a launch instead of an launch. Other than those little mistakes this sounded like a really fun night and I know you would've done great representing our school. Awesome work!
-Jenna
Hi Hayley!
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is awesome I like it because you wrote what it is and what you did there too!
It was also awesome that you said that you took on the healthy effort for subway, it's so awesome :-)
You need to check your spelling in there?