Six sentence story

By Anonymous -
In our classroom we are learning to write six sentence storys. Mr's Ealam gave us a picture which was of 3 kids on water floats on the sea, I chose to only do one character. Below is my six sentence story:
THE WAVE
I am floating on my water float, just me, Linda the extraordinary, utmost and supreme swimmer EVER!
Turning and looking at my home I see that my Dad is squinting at me from the balcony of the blue beach house, shaking his head.
‘Splatter!’ I swan dive into the clear blue water down into the depths of the ocean, holding my breath for more than a minute 30 seconds.
I do it again, this time diving deeper and deeper as I start to leave my breath behind me.
I feel as if I am suffocating, my breath is turning into void, floating away from my body.
Desperately needing air I feel powerful muscly arms wrapping around my waist, pulling me to the surface.

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  1. AnonymousJune 23, 2015 at 9:27 AM

    Hey Angus! Her dad grabbed her because he thought she would have an acciedent. See ya.

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  2. AnonymousJune 23, 2015 at 9:27 AM

    Hey Angus! Her dad grabbed her because he thought she would have an acciedent. See ya.

    ReplyDelete

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